No sense of excitement or arousal building, of the softness of skin, of textures and smells and tastes. xxx video good job, but make the next one longerAnonymous readerReport 2009-02-24 00:03:09PLEASE avoid words like “boobies” and “tittyfuck” — they’re juvenile. No sense of excitement or arousal building, of the softness of skin, of textures and smells and tastes. No contrast of the delicate and the animal, of the smooth and the ridged — nothing of interest here. good job, but make the next one longerAnonymous readerReport 2009-02-24 00:03:09PLEASE avoid words like “boobies” and “tittyfuck” — they’re juvenile. Read stories by qlick, sinturian, ruth38, lubutt to get a sense of pacing and charged details.«12» good job, but make the next one longerAnonymous readerReport 2009-02-24 00:03:09PLEASE avoid words like “boobies” and “tittyfuck” — they’re juvenile.
