Too many unanswered questions. Overall I liked it, would make a good movie.«1» 3 comments«1»Doozy woof HunterReport 2021-06-04 16:31:33Great story, but a total anti-climax at the end – thus only 4/10READERReport 2004-02-24 04:58:19Very nice story, Perhaps to be continued in further chapters?READERReport 2004-02-17 14:29:34Good story, except for the ending. xvideo Perhaps the author realized it was getting long and ended it but should have made it long enough to tell whether the ladies saved the town and who it was that wrote the beginning of the story. 3 comments«1»Doozy woof HunterReport 2021-06-04 16:31:33Great story, but a total anti-climax at the end – thus only 4/10READERReport 2004-02-24 04:58:19Very nice story, Perhaps to be continued in further chapters?READERReport 2004-02-17 14:29:34Good story, except for the ending. 3 comments«1»Doozy woof HunterReport 2021-06-04 16:31:33Great story, but a total anti-climax at the end – thus only 4/10READERReport 2004-02-24 04:58:19Very
