a little unbelievable too the way the sex starts up in both chapters which comes across as laziness by the writer lol anyway thanks for the storyanonymous readerReport 2010-09-07 03:27:31keep going really great story«1» a little unbelievable too the way the sex starts up in both chapters which comes across as laziness by the writer lol anyway thanks for the storyanonymous readerReport 2010-09-07 03:27:31keep going really great story«1» a little unbelievable too the way the sex starts up in both chapters which comes across as laziness by the writer lol anyway thanks for the storyanonymous readerReport 2010-09-07 03:27:31keep going really great story«1» 4 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2011-04-23 19:14:49When is the next chapter coming out???anonymous readerReport 2011-02-25 11:38:17what the hell way to rushed this isn’t a race slow down and develope the charicters and story you need to make the readers
