But You have jumbled everything into one or two paragraphs which makes for a boring read. But You have jumbled everything into one or two paragraphs which makes for a boring read. xxx video First the story line runs fairly consistent throughout. Also try and make paragraphs makes it easier to read.Anonymous readerReport 2010-07-21 04:18:40its spelled which not witch.«12» But You have jumbled everything into one or two paragraphs which makes for a boring read. First the story line runs fairly consistent throughout. Also try and make paragraphs makes it easier to read.Anonymous readerReport 2010-07-21 04:18:40its spelled which not witch.«12» You also have not finished the story which is a big letdown, what happens to the main characters? You also have not finished the story which is a big letdown, what happens to the main characters?
