10 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2016-08-02 18:25:47Your story is greatAnonymous readerReport 2009-10-21 05:20:31You’ve got the basics of a good story here, but the grammar and spelling need work. A second grader could do better! xxx video It’s a simple matter of proofreading, using SpellCheck, and careful rewriting.Anonymous readerReport 2008-08-10 19:54:26Did you ever go to school? It’s a simple matter of proofreading, using SpellCheck, and careful rewriting.Anonymous readerReport 2008-08-10 19:54:26Did you ever go to school? Because your grammar & spelling suck! You only wish that happened you sad little bitch.«12» Because your grammar & spelling suck! You only wish that happened you sad little bitch.«12» A second grader could do better! It’s a simple matter of proofreading, using SpellCheck, and careful rewriting.Anonymous readerReport 2008-08-10 19:54:26Did you ever go to school?
