All writers need someone to proof read their stores.READERReport 2006-06-22 16:21:30What do you mean sentences end wuth periods not commas? not a bad effort.READERReport 2006-06-16 01:06:20Yes, ths is one of my first serious efforts, I’ve written before, but now I’m taking it seriously. xx video not a bad effort.READERReport 2006-06-16 01:06:20Yes, ths is one of my first serious efforts, I’ve written before, but now I’m taking it seriously. ” Spell Check would have found that typo then you fix it. I dont see a single period or comma out of place.READERReport 2006-06-16 05:29:03I agree about the Paragrphing. not a bad effort.READERReport 2006-06-16 01:06:20Yes, ths is one of my first serious efforts, I’ve written before, but now I’m taking it seriously. Thanks for the advce, check back with me in the future, I’ll put it to good use.READERReport 2006-06-16 00:17:33wheres the s&m?«12»
