6/10READERReport 2007-08-11 22:53:24If u stole it at least steal something good!!!!!! Spelling & grammar, nothing glared as wrong. xx video The scenario & details of action are great. Spelling & grammar, nothing glared as wrong. The scenario & details of action are great. Spelling & grammar, nothing glared as wrong. The main problem is the “person” speaking or telling the story. 6/10READERReport 2007-08-11 22:53:24If u stole it at least steal something good!!!!!! Some paragraphs a little lông; some dialogue not clearly marked! 6/10READERReport 2007-08-11 22:53:24If u stole it at least steal something good!!!!!! The scenario & details of action are great. 14 comments«123»Dudley DowrongReport 2021-01-20 04:15:46Changing voice/person as you have, is not easy & confusing. Some paragraphs a little lông; some dialogue not clearly marked!
