Don’t be afraid to write and add paragraphs/grammar. xxx video You need to work on your detail and the story length. Also watch what types you put on top, you only had a gang rape of males/ female.anonymous readerReport 2013-02-28 00:38:25Break-up your paragraphs, watch your spelling and you capitalize CCUSA in one place and don’t in another (careful). A few area’s for improvement though. You need to work on your detail and the story length. Instead of critisizing just read and move to the next story don’t bring a person down for having the guts to post here. Instead of critisizing just read and move to the next story don’t bring a person down for having the guts to post here.
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