Made it more believable. 10 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2013-09-05 01:08:35you are all dick heads, It is great story, because it is true, unlike 90% of the bullshit ‘true stories’ on here. xvideo Look forward to reading more. Well done mate. Look forward to reading more. cheersAnonymous readerReport 2009-11-26 18:01:23Ur all assholes. Well done mate. Good job 4 ur first try, try to discribe it a bit moreanonReport 2009-11-21 00:01:24good storyboothillReport 2009-11-17 03:56:22Sorry about the way i’ve written my story,I didn’t realise I was gonna be judged on my grammer,it’s my first go but I’l take your tips on boardAnonymous readerReport 2009-11-16 13:25:02This isn’t even fit to be toilet paper.«12» cheersAnonymous readerReport 2009-11-26 18:01:23Ur all assholes. Well done mate. yes it needs paragraphs and proper grammar, but i enjoyed the natural everyday speaking nature of it.
