not a bad effort.READERReport 2006-06-16 01:06:20Yes, ths is one of my first serious efforts, I’ve written before, but now I’m taking it seriously. xxx video also sentences end with a period not a comma. ” Spell Check would have found that typo then you fix it. also sentences end with a period not a comma. also sentences end with a period not a comma. ” Spell Check would have found that typo then you fix it. Thanks for the advce, check back with me in the future, I’ll put it to good use.READERReport 2006-06-16 00:17:33wheres the s&m?«12» All writers need someone to proof read their stores.READERReport 2006-06-22 16:21:30What do you mean sentences end wuth periods not commas?
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