4 comments«1»demck23Report 2011-04-18 12:58:50good story line just have more action & have him do more to her . have her doing moreanonymous readerReport 2011-04-13 11:16:19gave you a positive but you could have done alot more with it. xvideo Could have been a great story but you fucking blew it. Having him realy put her though her paces. Could have been a great story but you fucking blew it. You’ve earned this NEGATIVE VOTE.anonymous readerReport 2011-04-12 21:46:16to short it could have been a hole lot better it a great start to a story u just need more detail and u have a great hit.«1» Having him realy put her though her paces. What an asshole. 4 comments«1»demck23Report 2011-04-18 12:58:50good story line just have more action & have him do more to her .
