16 comments«1234»Anonymous readerReport 2016-05-02 16:45:54thumbs up.realy enjoyed d storyanonymous readerReport 2013-07-22 18:29:21I like having golf bats xD. xvideo There is nothing better. The only ‘bad’ thing about your story that I hated to see, was that it had to end. Keep up the good work. Your story was very well thought out. You included enough detail to make the story interesting but not to much to make it boring. I don’t agree with other comments, your language is fine.«1234» I had more problems reading some of the comments that some people have made here about your story, then I did reading your story.gymgirlReport 2012-10-29 17:54:55Haha great story! It’s true that perhaps some of your words didn’t quite fit in with the story, but that is only a minor detail.
