Dude is MEXICANFbaileyReport 2010-06-16 23:42:35Great story keep it goingThe EditorReport 2010-06-16 19:01:33Sorry, but I couldn’t finish reading this “Supposed” story, it was just to difficult to read and understand. There was poor plot development and your use of colloquialisms and slang greatly detracted from your story development. xx video 8 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2014-10-24 17:25:37I don’t know who’s talking there’s like three or four people talking and I don’t know who’s whoAnonymous readerReport 2010-06-17 08:47:00He even said Yo… There was poor plot development and your use of colloquialisms and slang greatly detracted from your story development. Before you try again I recommend that you take some creative writing courses. I give this attempt a 1 out of 10.«12»
