12 comments«123»Anonymous readerReport 2016-10-17 16:40:25The last person’s post I fully agree with & think exactly what/how they said it. I can understand you being pissed off with the criticism you get; just understand that improvement best comes by responding to criticism, without criticism one tends to become delusional about one’s abilities, adopting an aura of self-perceived perfection. xvideo Please desist from posting until you learn more about WRITING!!!anonymous readerReport 2012-12-22 09:50:08Liked alot 9/10 from meanonymous readerReport 2012-11-21 11:13:19Yeah i Was using a mobile phone to read this story kind of hard reading it When you double spacing it but however great story :)«123» I write as well & it would be im-perfect me NOT to be told if I was doing something incorrectly.
