To Thel20, you should proofread your comments, your writing and grammar was every bit as bad as the authors. I’m not going to tell you to stop writing like some people will. xxx video I never said anything about the spelling or grammar of the story. Cya Later:)
Thel20anonymous readerReport 2013-05-10 10:58:11I’m not going to say it was bad but i will say that you really need to start proof reading. I never said anything about the spelling or grammar of the story. My advice is to rewrite this and proof read it to make sure it works well before posting it. the story it self was ok but it was a little rough and it didn’t really have a flow at all.«12» So like i said really work on your writing and proof read it be
