Even overlooking the typos and bad grammar this was a jumbled mess. Even overlooking the typos and bad grammar this was a jumbled mess. xx video 4 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-05-07 21:32:09hurro i be bringing da chickeen fwied wice foar dah stupeed wyte peohplesanonymous readerReport 2013-05-07 20:12:02PLEASE REDO THIS STORY OR DELETE IT, FOR THAT THIS IS ONE OF THE “NOT SO GOOD” STORY, SORRY, BUT IT NEEDS A LOT OF POLISHING UP TO BE OF ANY GOOD!!anonymous readerReport 2013-05-07 01:21:58I read this twice in hopes of making some sense of it but no luck. Even overlooking the typos and bad grammar this was a jumbled mess. PLEASE DO NOT WRITE THIS OVER AGAIN FROM BELLAS VIEW, Not only is it pointless as we already know her story, but this site is already filled with to many fucking rape and
