Keep writing!«12» dude, dont copy! xvideos dont be a pussy!anonymous readerReport 2013-10-06 00:34:09Oh the humanity! Your stories are badly written rip offs of other much better authors.krc1993Report 2013-09-24 04:52:54Anu females age 18-45 wanna roleplay? Keep writing!«12» 8 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2016-06-23 02:27:44this. SHIT. My question for BLUEHEATT himself is, “Why are you re-posting some of your stories?”
This story was first posted on 06-22-2012, under the same title, almost verbatim, except for the last few lines of the ending.PenKnave193Report 2013-09-23 13:41:48On the whole not a bad story. Your stories are badly written rip offs of other much better authors.krc1993Report 2013-09-24 04:52:54Anu females age 18-45 wanna roleplay? The problems that I had was the constant shifting between different points of view.
