You keep using Your instead of You’re, cars don’t have breaks unless they’re broken, they have brakes, start each sentence with a capital, use punctuation for goodness sake! xvideos Don’t stop writing, the stories are good, but please learn to use the correct words and punctuation.Anonymous readerReport 2014-08-17 12:28:18A nice story,but you effed up by adding 10 inches of d gave a negative vote.«12345» 28 comments«12345»wantingnotReport 2019-11-03 23:10:58Th concept is quite good but it is presented poorly. The storyline is opressively trite and it’s filled with minucia.Anonymous readerReport 2014-08-24 23:52:18The basic story is good, but you really need to work on your spelling and grammar. It had a lot of potential but poor grammar and inarticulation made it boring and difficult to read. The storyline is opressively trite and it’s filled with minucia.Anonymous readerReport 2014-08-24 23:52:18The basic story is
