then u switched from her POV to his. …u really need to learn to write better & proofread ur work…it didn’t flow well at all. xx video Don’t take credit for others work!anonymous readerReport 2011-08-17 11:27:06should we have the third part guys?«1» This is written by davidhog and is on this very site. then u switched from her POV to his. …u really need to learn to write better & proofread ur work…it didn’t flow well at all. then she was wearing a dress?? 5 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2012-06-05 15:03:17You’re a shitty thief and a shittier writer.anonymous readerReport 2012-02-27 16:55:19how can you have ELDER SISTER 2 when there was no chapter 1 and stop stealing it is a felony do us all a favor and delete this trash nowanonymous readerReport 2012-01-28 06:59:53Ok…but when the hell did she put her clothes back on between
