The sex part could have been longer, but then again, I tend to make mine a little short as well. xxx video But I did finish it. 1 comments«1»ClyReport 2013-08-23 19:38:00It was OK. The sex part could have been longer, but then again, I tend to make mine a little short as well. The grammar and spelling were good enough, much better than most others on this site. This story lacked something, and I can’t put my finger on it. 1 comments«1»ClyReport 2013-08-23 19:38:00It was OK. But I did finish it. Good job over all!«1» Would have been awesome if the paladins got their asses kicked at the end. But I did finish it. The grammar and spelling were good enough, much better than most others on this site.
