I disagree with the comment about the synonyms, I found them both charming and witty!!!! Very, very, nicely done!!!anonymous readerReport 2013-08-24 05:48:47Jesus fuck what the shit, It’s like Lovecraft made a porno for his blind brother. xx video Bravo, rutger5, you’ve constructed something of unfathomable…something. Some constructive criticism though, don’t abuse the thesaurus, your prose seems very unnatural when you work in all those fucking synonyms.anonymous readerReport 2013-02-25 15:34:55I fucking died
Best XNXX story of 2013anonymous readerReport 2013-02-25 15:06:47If I may be honest, this isn’t really one of your best…sort of like a pornographic take on that film Jack Frost.«1» Great characters and plot.Anonymous readerReport 2014-04-26 05:20:31Simply delightful!!! Some constructive criticism though, don’t abuse the thesaurus, your prose seems very unnatural when you work in all those fucking synonyms.anonymous readerReport 2013-02-25 15:34:55I fucking died
Best XNXX story of 2013anonymous readerReport 2013-02-25 15:06:47If I may
