It’s very distracting when you’re interested in a part, then suddenly it repeats several paragraphs.«123» And the paragraphs repeating is really annoyinganonymous readerReport 2012-02-08 17:01:57No, No, No, No, No, No!anonymous readerReport 2011-02-06 22:06:24The story itself was pretty good. xvideo It’s very distracting when you’re interested in a part, then suddenly it repeats several paragraphs.«123» I stopped right there and couldn’t keep reading. I don’t like insest. I enjoyed it. Get yourself an editor.anonymous readerReport 2013-02-18 05:01:06I was enjoying it until it got to the part about her parents passing out. 15 comments«123»Anonymous readerReport 2014-06-13 14:18:53I louved thees story, and I am reeley lougged een. SEE?Anonymous readerReport 2014-02-17 17:34:39The story itself has potential. But you need to clean it up and resubmit it.
