interesting concept though
6/10
thanxREADERReport 2007-03-29 00:37:22Oh, oh. 7 comments«12»READERReport 2007-03-30 13:57:37You really need to read your work over and check all those little words for spelling. xxx video Other than that it was not a bad story.READERReport 2007-03-29 21:51:53stupid story its never acceptable to encourage or condone forced sex its nothing short of rape you assholeREADERReport 2007-03-29 09:12:32punctuation,paragraphs,who is talking?all need attention before you post your next story. Dam fuck me hard “thing that stops watter from flowing freely” you; shit.”
“Oh, oh fuck I’m Cumming oh, dam,”
what u realy said: “Oh, oh fuck I’m Cumming oh, “thing that stops watter from flowing freely”,”
yu spel “Dam” D-A-M-N
Yuse Yore Spelchek
marko polo7READERReport 2007-03-29 00:28:33not bad. . . . …i liked it :D«12» 7 comments«12»READERReport 2007-03-30 13:57:37You really need to read your work over and check all those little words for spelling.
