17 comments«1234»bigdaddyg123Report 2014-12-30 07:31:08″A Secret Brother And Sister’s Secret Romance”- Twenty-two Year Old Brother Sean and Twenty Year Old Sister Mary. Paragraphs are necessary, by using about five sentences for EACH paragraph and/or the changing of the thought processes or using more quotes of conversation to break into paragrpahs. xvideo Don’t get discouraged.«1234» So much information is missing that even the reader’s imagination can’t overcome!Anonymous readerReport 2014-09-22 02:38:58YER STORIES ARE SHIT JUST SO YOU KNOW MATEAnonymous readerReport 2014-06-19 04:08:59Ok that’s throwed off but a touching storyanonymous readerReport 2013-10-10 14:23:16D story is Good as well I love itjdm320Report 2013-10-01 11:29:09Story was not bad. The writing format, structure and construction are lacking in many areas.
